Evaluation Question #2

What have you learned from your audience feedback?

"Told their story clearly, but possibly could have benefited from some more creative images."

"There is a good natural feel to the characters, they're very true to 'music video' characters. The ending is particularly good. A real music video feel, could have been the real thing."

" Story was simple but effective. Some of the camera/editing effects were a little distracting, sometimes less is more. The opening and closing titles were 'top class'. The colour accent didn't quite work probably due to the over cast lighting and it didn't work in the videos favour. The cars in the background distracted, a better location could have been selected. Cant they find a park bench like normal alcoholics??!!"

When discussing our promotional package we decided we were aiming our product at 13 years and up indie/alternative fans, both male and female. The reason we have such a wide age range is because this genre of music is popular with all ages at the moment.

We decided to get our feedback by posting our video on "YouTube" and "Facebook". From this we received some good feedback and some constructive criticism. Alot of the points made we had already realised and pointed out ourselves.

We learnt alot from our audience feedback. Our location could have been a bit better, we could have moved further from the road, although upon filming we didn't feel the road was as much of a distraction as someone pointed out hence why we filmed there and not in the busy residential area we originally planned too. Our feedback also pointed out that some of our shots were unsteady and we should have taken more care to avoid this from happening. If we were to do this project again then we would take great care in making sure we had steady shots. Framing was another issue we had, some shots we cut off the top of our narrators head and we would be more careful of this next time.